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  Khawla H H Shubber 10 / 10 / 2018 Log in to Reply

  1- the title is (of Mortar and Concrete ) while the test and discussion is on concrete firstly then mortar, its better to take the same sequence.
  2- the hole paper need for rewriting and grammar check especially the spacing and positions of point and comma
  3- in abstract, the first three lines need reference, but its not allowed in abstract, so its better to change the paregraph
  4- in abstract, in line 4 and only, mentioned to rigid pavement, support it or delete it
  5- in abstract, “Aluminum was prepared from cutting the cans of coca- cola cans as fibers in concrete” its better to change to ” Aluminum fibers was prepared from cutting the cans of coca- cola cans as fibers in mortar and concrete” to comply the title
  6- in abstract, “This used Aluminum fiber is low density and less cost in addition to good tensile strength (about 3.10 MPa) and also has a good ductility”” what this ?????
  7- in abstract, many mistakes and misleading meaning and shortcut sentences, so need rewrite .

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  Khawla H H Shubber 11 / 10 / 2018 Log in to Reply

  after rearrange paper and review it, some notes listed in attached file in addition to the following point:
  1- in the paper there is a mentioned to using crashed course aggregate, what the usage of resulted concrete and why for using it?
  2- what about dimensions of mortar cubes and beams ??? there are only one dimension in the text
  3- need for more detailes for results discussion

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